To be honest I am not happy at all with the outcome of the water but I think everything else is OK.
Okay so those who do not know what this is about, Paris and I had a RP based off of the movie coming soon called The Shallows. My OC SM (He has no name exactly.) attacked Aline a heck ton, Ivy being too lazy to care for her own daughter's cries for help. We never really finished the RP but thats fine.=20
Hope this looks alright.
Aline and Ivy belong to @Paris
SM belongs to me.